Name:     BootNinja
IP:       24.4.254.172
Subject:  Gee, my Technical Writing class comes in handy after all
Email:    bootninja@home.com
Website:  http://

First, Get rid of the first sentence.  you don't have to tell them the purpose of the document
when your first sentence indirectly says it much better.



Secondly, Give them some Idea of what all these Internet Programs are, and what they do. What is
PHP, and MySql etc. Why Is it good for you to know them?



Third.  Don't tell them that they can easily fire you.  they know this.  It's in the paperwork
that you signed when you were hired.



Don't EVER use the word disadvantage in a paper like this.  instead say:





While there are many advantageous aspects of this arrangement, for both your company and myself,
I will be 1000 miles away, and as a consequence I will only be available via e-mail, and the
telephone.



I like the way you emphasized that you will be able to stay in touch with them.  Just don't
pound it into the ground.  also, you might see if Sprint Offers cellular service in provo, so
you would have another form of mobile communication.





Just tell them times here.  not 11:00(10:00 Lubbock time).  They don't care what time it is in
Utah, and it is a bit confusing.



Don't emphasize the distance.  the last sentence shouldn't mention the fact that you will be "so
far away".  just leave it at the fact that you have enjoyed working there, and that you would
like to continue to do so.   otherwise, it's good.  let me know how it works out.